Here's the story scoop: Laina is one of the last surviving humans after earth was destroyed when the humans tried to kill the cyborgs they'd created when the cyborgs rebelled and escaped. Now the Cyborgs, with permission of the Galactic High Council have free rein to pursue the last remnants of the human race and do with them as they see fit. Rorik, a cyborg lieutenant stumbles upon Laina hiding in a ship and he captures her, thinking to get information about the whereabouts of other humans. But when the cyborg doctor on Rorik's ship runs tests on Laina, a genetic anomaly in her hand raises questions and he suddenly wonders if Laina might hold the key to the survival of the cyborg race. Can he learn to trust and love his sworn enemy if it means he might save his people?
Last week we left off with Rorik having knocked Laina out with his phaser and he's brought her on board the cyborg ship the Orion and taken her to the sick bay. Rorik and Valerius want her to take off her clothes.
“Yes, removing your clothes will help my scanners penetrate your body so I can see
more clearly.”
“Do
I have to?” She realized grudgingly, that she wasn’t above begging.
The
blond haired cyborg made a low growling noise in the back of his throat that
made her squeeze the jacket about her throat even tighter. His hands shot out,
prying her own hands from her collar and he tore the jacket open, eyes raking
her body savagely.
“Um,
Rorik. What are you doing?” the doctor asked.
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Was I supposed to chuckle? I did. I take it the cyborgs don't know a thing about anxiety or fear. LOL Great 8
ReplyDeleteSure, a weapon! Entertaining eight, really good!
ReplyDeleteThis darn cyborg...he needs to get a clue. Poor girl, I hope if she kicks him in the nards, it'll still hurt him!
ReplyDeleteLoving this story! Great eight, Lauren. I cannot wait to read the book!
ReplyDeleteI wasn't expecting that reaction from Rorik...excellent excerpt. I really enjoy this story!
ReplyDeleteLOL! Oh, that old excuse...a weapon on her person. He just wanted to see her naked...sneaky cyborg.
ReplyDeleteyes, definitely must be hiding a weapon. LOL.what a great 8. Rorik has no idea what's come over him with the human
ReplyDeleteSo next he'll have to frisk her? Made me smile. Nice.
ReplyDeleteI don't know about that--if it's anything like an x-ray or any other scan, I don't think clothes matter at all to the machine.
ReplyDeleteI think they just want her naked. Do cyborgs not have an issue with nudity, or is Rorik just that much of a paranoid jerk?
Rorik is really something, doesn't he know that girls don't undress in front of men just cause they asked?
ReplyDeletePoor clueless Rorik. Right away he thinks of battle first. MUST be a weapon. I know, it's a cyborg thing. :) I'm enjoying your story Lauren.
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Ooo, hot dayum! More, please. :) Love the excuse at the very end. A weapon! Pfft! lol Great 8! :D
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