Here's the story scoop: Laina is one of the last surviving humans after earth was destroyed when the humans tried to kill the cyborgs they'd created when the cyborgs rebelled and escaped. Now the Cyborgs, with permission of the Galactic High Council have free rein to pursue the last remnants of the human race and do with them as they see fit. Rorik, a cyborg lieutenant stumbles upon Laina hiding in a ship and he captures her, thinking to get information about the whereabouts of other humans. But when the cyborg doctor on Rorik's ship runs tests on Laina, a genetic anomaly in her hand raises questions and he suddenly wonders if Laina might hold the key to the survival of the cyborg race. Can he learn to trust and love his sworn enemy if it means he might save his people?
Last week we left off with Rorik having knocked Laina out with his phaser and he's brought her on board the cyborg ship the Orion and taken her to the sick bay. She's just come around from being knocked out.
Out
of the frying pan and into the fire as her mother used to say. Laina’s brain
pounded fiercely against the insides of her skull. What the hell had happened
after she fell out of the air duct? She’d been running…somewhere and then
blinding pain and nothing.
“What
did you do to me?” she demanded, but to her shame she sounded as breathless and
frightened as she felt. The blond cyborg studied her, the chilly depths of his
electric blue gaze taking in every inch of her to the point that she was
beginning to almost feel a physical touch on her body.
“I stunned you. You fell and hit your head."
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I love that she feels the intensity of his gaze as almost a physical touch...especially after hearing his thoughts last week.
ReplyDeleteGreat description of him. A wonderful 8 the whole way around. You've really pulled me into this story, Lauren! :-)
ReplyDeleteI just want to keep reading this story! So today's was another wonderful excerpt...
ReplyDeleteI love this story and cannot WAIT to read the full novel! You've really pulled me in with your eights. Well done, Lauren.
ReplyDeleteI absolutely love this story so far. I could feel how disconcerted she is.
ReplyDeleteNice 8. I love sci-fi romance and can't wait to read more. I love the fact he hesitated for a moment before answering her. Makes it seem as if he's weighing his options. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteScary moment, I'm intrigued by this and keen to read more!
ReplyDeleteOoo, is he gonna do more? :P Totally dig this story! Great 8!
ReplyDeleteHmm... an interesting setup; love with a cyborg? I really love his matter-of-fact reply there. Thanks for sharing!
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