I'm changing gears this Sunday after a couple of weeks off from Eight Sentence Sunday. I'm happy to announce I'll be posting some snippets from new latest WIP called Across the Stars. It's a SFR or Sci-Fi Romance.
Here's the story scoop: Laina is one of the last surviving humans after earth was destroyed when the humans tried to kill the cyborgs they'd created when the cyborgs rebelled and escaped. Now the Cyborgs, with permission of the Galactic High Council have free rein to pursue the last remnants of the human race and do with them as they see fit. Rorik, a cyborg lieutenant stumbles upon Laina hiding in a ship and he captures her, thinking to get information about the whereabouts of other humans. But when the cyborg doctor on Rorik's ship runs tests on Laina, a genetic anomaly in her hand raises questions and he suddenly wonders if Laina might hold the key to the survival of the cyborg race. Can he learn to trust and love his sworn enemy if it means he might save his people? Last week we left off with Laina having gotten her first glimpse of Rorik through her cabin window as his ship prepares to board hers.
He was staring back at her through the floor to ceiling window of the Orion. Legs braced apart, hands clasped
behind his back in a military at-rest position, he looked every inch the
predator she knew he was.
His
lips curled into a smile that seemed to say, "I'm coming for you little
mouse."
The
Orion drew nearer and when it was
close enough to extend a connecting bridge, the Calliope shuddered violently as the bridge locked onto the
transport ship’s bay doors.
The
blond haired cyborg turned to say something to another of his crew before he
left the main deck. She swallowed thickly; he’d seen her. Hiding was now
crucial, but she had a sinking feeling that no matter where she hid they’d find
her. If they knew she was on board, they’d tear the ship apart to get to her.
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Such an intriguing premise and I loved this snippet. Probably too late to hide, little mouse! Excellent excerpt!
ReplyDeleteThanks Veronica! She's definitely too late to hide and there lies the fun!
DeleteOh, I think she should have hidden sooner! I wouldn't like to cross him. Brilliant excerpt.
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by Karen! You definitely wouldn't want to cross Rorik he's a real bada**! lol
Deletefilled with tension - whether the mouse will be found out by the rats lol - I'd bet not
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by Sassyspeaks!
DeleteMaybe she should think about weapons and a last stand? Heh, that's what *I'd* do. Then, again, I'm pretty ruthless. :)
ReplyDeleteDon't worry, she'll put a up a good fight when she has to Monica. Thanks for stopping by!! :)
DeleteOooh, he sounds very interesting. A blond haired cyborg...just has a great ring to it!
ReplyDeleteThank you Ann! I'm glad Rorik sounds interesting. He's pretty awesome.
DeleteDamn, hide with weapons...yikes!
ReplyDeletelol, too bad for her she doesn't have any but her fists!
DeleteSo much promise and potential in this snippet, as far as action. I'm compelled to root for Laina. You have great writing skill and I really like your technique!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Susan! I am so glad you're rooting for Laina, she needs someone rooting for it.
DeleteI love that line..."I'm coming for you little mouse". Great concept, Lauren
ReplyDeleteSandra
Thank you Sandy! I'm so glad you like the line!
DeleteWonderful, Lauren!! I tweeted.
ReplyDeleteThank you for coming by and tweeting Ella!
DeleteThat IS a great line, Lauren! But he's so hot I wonder if she really wants to hide from him. :) Tweeting
ReplyDeleteLOL, Louisa you crack me up. There's definitely no hiding and once Laina gets to know Rorik better she won't want to.
DeleteBrilliant concept, Lauren! The story sounds truly fascinating!
ReplyDeleteThank you Christi! I'm so glad you like it!
DeleteVery nice! I like, "little mouse." Tweeted.
ReplyDeleteThank you Collette! That line definitely seems to be the favorite!
DeleteOoo, nice! Lots of drama and intrigue in those 8 sentences! :D
ReplyDeleteThank you Karen! I'm so glad you liked them!
DeleteIN-TENSE! Wow--great writing, Lauren! I'll be following this one! :-)
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad Teresa! I was hoping I'd find some people who would like this story! :)
DeleteSuper line about the mouse. I love the sound of this one.
ReplyDeleteThanks Elaine!!
DeleteLove the snippet!! Facebooked and tweeted!
ReplyDeleteThanks Nancy!
DeleteAwesome eight!! I love your author voice. And I love your Tudors pic of Henry Cavill. (insert dreamy eyes here)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Sara!! I LOVE Henry. He the inspiration for my regency hero Godric.
DeleteI can feel so much danger in here. The cyborgs are definitely not friendly.
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