Hot Guys, Music, and TV- A Romance Writer’s Guide to Getting
Inspired
The last
several weeks I have been working tirelessly on fleshing out my modern Gothic
story The Shadows of Stormclyffe Hall.
It’s nearly done and I thought I’d take the time to celebrate and post about
what fired up my writing engines. The first thing I did was set the pen and
paper aside and unplugged the laptop and…turned on the TV. Yes. Believe it or
not, that’s what I did and it had some amazing results. Keeping reading to find
out why!
Here’s
the blurb for the book:
Bastian Carlisle,
the Earl of Weymouth, doesn’t believe in ghosts. Even though his ancestral
home, Stormclyffe Hall had been abandoned for the last sixty years, he decides
to restore it to its former glory. His plans for renovations are disrupted when
a bookish American woman shows up on his doorstep hoping to pry into his
family’s tragic history.
Jane Seyton, an American
graduate student, is convinced there’s more to the tragedy of Stormclyffe Hall
than history tells. Drawn by the need to uncover the mystery buried in the
castle’s stones, she comes face to face with the reality that the castle is
haunted. Despite a chilling encounter with a woman clad in white, and blue
lights that seem to follow her through darkened halls, she is determined to
discover the truth, even if it means putting up with the arrogant, yet sexy,
Bastian.
As Jane and
Bastian are forced to deal with the dark reality of the castle and the
timeless, tragic love of Bastian’s ancestors, they find something they weren’t
looking for, a passion that ignites their hearts as nothing else could. But an
evil supernatural force is determined to keep them apart, forever.
Will they discover
that their love and trust in one another is the weapon they need to confront
the shadows of Stormclyffe? Or are they doomed to repeat the past?
When it
came time to actually get inspired to fleshing out the atmosphere and the
gothic feel of the castle and how it would be for the characters to interact
there, I started pulling out books on English country homes. There were some
fantastic pictures that really helped me visualize the opulence of the bedrooms
and the desolation of a lonely castle on a Cliffside. Sometimes a writer's bestfriend is research. If you're coming up dry on descriptions or having trouble visulizing a scene, start off with some good books. Go to Amazon or your favorite bookstore in person or online and just start searching. You would be surprised at the gold mine of pictures available, especially if you're writing historical books or books set in a particular place.
My
search for inspiration didn’t stop there. I wanted to find the perfect hero to
visualize in the perfect atmosphere to capture the English playboy Bastian, a
man in his late twenties who has had much tragedy and mystery surrounding his
past. It would take a special actor to capture this essence and I found him!
Four days ago I watched the first episode of the new TV series The White Queen
on Starz based on Phillipa Gregory’s novel. Max Irons stole my attention
completely. (for those of you who don’t know him, he’s the son of Jeremy Irons)
He was
Bastian, albeit in a medieval era. I immediately started googling all things
Max Irons, getting pictures, watching the other movies he has been in (which I
had seen before now, but was happily re-watching). When I came across the short video below which
was prepared during a Vanity Fair photo shoot I was shell-shocked. Max Irons is
strolling around Althorp, one of the very mansions I used as inspiration for
parts of the interior of Stormclyffe Hall and he has a brooding and almost
haunted expression in some of the video that was completely reminiscent of my
own tortured hero. In the video Max searches through the house for something,
but never finds it and all the while he’s surrounded by a beautiful and elegant
house. It was the perfect video. Whenever I need inspiration for Bastian, the
video is in my YouTube list.
Want to
see what video I’m talking about? Check it out below:
And lastly, as an author, sometimes music can be your biggest asset. Prepare a playlist for a scene, or perhaps a playlist for a the hero or the heroine or perhaps a list with songs that remind you of their relationship. It's amazing what you can find out there to get yourself inspired. I turn often to groups like Nox Arcana for my scary suspenseful or haunting music and to Audiomachine and Two Steps From Hell for my epic scores that get me thinking about picture parts of my plots.
Here’s
an excerpt from The Shadows of Stormclyffe Hall (please pardon any grammatical
errors as this has not yet passed through edits):
As she
trailed behind Bastian, she was torn between admiring his tight butt molded in
charcoal slacks and the beautiful interior of the castle. He hadn’t prepared
her for the library though. Nothing could have.
None of
the photographs of the Hall had ever revealed the library’s appearance. She had
assumed it was because it was like any other library in any other castle or
manor house. How wrong she was.
The
library was awash with bold reds and a range of pale yellows to deep golds.
Wall panels were decorated with art that looked so familiar.
“Is this
what I think it is?” She pointed to one of the panels which was a red painted
background with a Chinese scene in yellow.
His lips
twitched. “If you’re thinking of William Alexander’s book Views of China, then you are correct. Richard apparently enjoyed
the text immensely and had an artist replicate many of the etchings.”
Jane
smiled. “I can see why. The culture and the life…can you imagine what it must
have been like for Alexander?” She knew that William Alexander had been an
English watercolorist who had visited China and made drawings of the scenery
and life in China. His Views of China
was a highly valued work and much admired. Even the Brighton Pavilion Palace
boasted similar scenes inspired by William Alexander’s book.
A soft
look filled Bastian’s eyes as he considered her words. “I would give so much to
see through the eyes of the dead, to see what they have seen, to experience
times I cannot fathom.” He looked away then, his eyes roving the two story high
shelves of the library, but Jane couldn’t tear her gaze from him.
How many
women had fallen under his spell? A man haunted by his family’s past, a
dedicated scholar and as brooding and captivating as Lord Byron. If she let her
thoughts run away with her, she knew that Bastian would distract her from her
thesis. She had to stay focused.
They
started moving again and Jane tilted her head back to better admire the lotus
flower shaped chandeliers. Intricate paintings decorated each of the petals on
every chandelier. In the middle of the wall to the right, a vast fireplace rose
up with columns on either side adorned with twining serpents. Unable to resist
the urge, she rushed over and touched the pale Swedish green marble that formed
the snake. The serpent’s features were sculpted so precisely that she
half-expected it to come to life and bite her.
A
massive mirror hung above the fireplace and it reflected the windows on the
opposite side of the library. A lush landscaped garden seemed to stretch for
miles beyond the fireplace. The deceptive placing of the mirror created an
enchanting illusion that one could walk through the mirror into an alternate
world. Above the mirror a marble dragon perched atop the mirror’s gilt edged
frame. Its wings were spread wide, jaws gaping open as it silently roared.
Jane
gasped. A sudden flash of something wild and fearful ripped through her before
it was gone.
“Jane?”
Bastian placed a hand on her shoulder, but then almost immediately he removed
it and stepped back from her. “Are you well? You gave a little start just now.”
She
hastily nodded. “Yes, I’m fine. It’s just…that dragon. It’s so…” How could she
describe having such a visceral reaction to a stone creature?
“Fierce.
The beast is fierce.” Bastian tilted his head up to stare at it and crossed his
arms over his chest, scowling back at the dragon.
Jane
realized then she was still touching the serpent’s head and she pulled her hand
away.
“Fierce
indeed. I didn’t expect such decorations in a library.”
Bastian
chuckled. “It was modeled after the Music room in the Pavilion in Brighton.”
Ahh, I had guessed right then.
“Only my
ancestor, Richard, believed something more…medieval would suite Stormclyffe. He
modified the dragon’s designs to this above, as opposed to the more complacent looking
counterparts in Brighton who merely were decorations to hold the curtains in
place.”
The eyes
of the dragon seemed to watch her as she shifted from one foot to the other.
It’s long, angular snout looked ready to spew fire and puff smoke from its nostrils.
The way it hunched over the mirror gave her the distinct impression it wasn’t
merely guarding the library, but rather hunting the library’s inhabitants. It
was an unsettling thought.
“You
don’t like it?” The earl teased her.
Jane
nibbled her lip thoughtfully. “It’s not that I don’t like it. I just feel like
it’s watching me.”
At her
reply, Bastian grinned. “Don’t tell me you are afraid? Isn’t your thesis
connected to mysteries and hauntings? That’s what your letters stated. I didn’t
think you would be so foolish as to pick a topic that would frighten you.”
Before
she even had time to react, she’d socked him in the shoulder again. She’d
punched an earl. This was a bad habit she was forming.
He
merely caught her by the shoulders, stilling her when she would have retreated
from him. Their faces were so close that she could see endless books reflected
in his eyes. He moved one hand up to cup her chin and tilted her head back.
“Perhaps,”
he murmured huskily. “You should have directed your thesis to something less
threatening.”
Brimming
with anger, she bit back a viper-like retort and smiled sweetly. “Such as?”
The
wicked glint in his eyes warned her he was going to say something infuriating.
“Why not
write about the effects of wildflowers in various English counties? Surely that
would inspire no fears?”
“Wildflowers?”
She knocked his hand away from her chin and turned her back on him. It seemed
he enjoyed provoking her. She didn’t have much of a natural temper, but what
little was there, he found and prodded repeatedly until she broke and snapped
at him.
“Oh come
now, Jane,” he said her name so softly, almost a croon, the way a man would to
soften his lover’s injured pride. That only made her more upset. The man was a
nuisance. Couldn’t he just leave her to the books and get on with his day?
Instead he insisted dragging her around the castle and teasing her.
She
didn’t reply. Not yet. When he came up behind her and gently turned her body
back to face his with a hand guiding her shoulder, she finally had to meet his
eyes.
“What’s
the matter?” he asked.
“What’s
the matter? I could ask you the same question. You’re teasing me and yet you—”
She didn’t dare finish. It felt like he was flirting with her, but maybe she
was wrong. The last thing she wanted him to think was that she viewed herself
worthy of his flirtations or that she wanted them. It would only complicate
things. While she didn’t mind complications, as she’d insisted to him earlier,
that had been under the pretense of being allowed to stay and conduct her
research. She hadn’t actually thought she’d start to succumb to his charms. It
was a good thing he had the ability to infuriate her as well. That made him far
less attractive.
“Can you
please just take me to the records?”
“Of
course.” His tone was more reserved again. The wall that had started to crumble
between them was solid again. “This way.”
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I think you found your perfect Bastian, Lauren. Great excerpt.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sandy!
DeleteOh, my, those photos are truly inspiring! Glad you found them. The snowy scene with the house above the graveyard is perfect. Are you using it in your cover design?
ReplyDelete~ junewilliams7
Thanks June! I hope to get the book published with a publisher, and I'm not sure what picture they will use for the cover. But I do LOVE this photo!
DeleteI love this story, and can't wait to see the new version!! Great hero pick, but what about the heroine? Or are you keeping him all to yourself?
ReplyDeleteOMG Lauren!!! I can' wait for this story. I lurve Gothics!!! Great excerpt and what a cutie Max is. yum yum. Tweeted and FB!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Nancy! I love Max...seriously LOVE.
DeleteYes, I can see him, & that mansion in your story. Nice... What inspires me? timeperiods (Civil War, Ancient Rome, Regency), music & TV (Spartacus, Gladiator, North & South)... too much :)
ReplyDeleteI'm right there with you Gina on the Spartacus!!
DeleteOooohhh...that pic of the manor is spooky! I love it. But your hero...to me he looks younger than late 20's. He looks like he's in his early 20's. lol But he's still a looker!! You Gothic story sounds VERY GOOD!!!
ReplyDeleteBelieve it or not Marie, Max irons is my age! He's 27!! But he does look sooo young!
DeleteOkay, so I'm hooked! I want more woman!
ReplyDeleteThink I need to hang me some pictures of some handsome gentlemen in my writing room...wonder how hubby would feel about that?
So true - inspiration can be anywhere. And a good Gothic romance needs a strong hero, which Max Irons definitely looks the part. Wonderful excerpt! Can`t wait to read the whole, fully realized gothic version! :)
ReplyDeleteOh, good Lord! Your excerpt...FANTASTIC. You have me hooked good and tight. Wow!
ReplyDeleteLoved your pictures.
I can't pinpoint what inspires me. Sometimes it is a song, sometimes an experience, and sometimes stories and characters just pop into my head.
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